Hazuki Nagisa

Here's the Constructive Criticism entry (or "How's My Driving?") for Nagisa Hazuki from Free! Iwatobi Swim Club. This is my first time playing him, so I appreciate input.

All comments, including anonymous ones, are screened and acceptable, although I'd much rather discuss something with someone non-anonly before it gets completely blown out of the water. We're all adults here, right?

As long as you can back up your opinions (i.e. don't just say "you suck," tell me WHY) then I will take your criticisms into account. Flames will just be ignored.

Any praise is of course always appreciated. Thank you! ♥

→ OOC
□ Name: Frudence
□ Age: 27
□ Contact: Plurk/AIM: frudence
□ Journal: frudence
□ Do you play anyone in Ariel?: I was just accepted for Riku Replica this round

→ IC
□ Name: Nagisa Hazuki
□ Journal: cutelilshit
□ Series: Free! Iwatobi Swim Club (anime + Drama CD supplementary background)
□ Canon point: Just after Episode 12 ends
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